Thank you for your application to The Calling! While reviewing your application, we did notice the need for a couple clarifications and possible revisions.
Your heroic/villainous section was a little scant. It would be nice to get a little more on how you feel the character fits into the morality scheme of their own universe. Further, you do need to choose between Journeyman and Mentor. Obviously, this status is malleable, but as it will be listed for IC player communication, you would need to choose which one you feel best represents him. And lastly, do the Aeslin mice have, in your opinion, sentience? If this is the case, they will not be able to accompany him. If not, then it would be allowed.
Once you've made the requested revisions, please reply to this posting and we will once again review your application. Please note that revisions are processed, along with applications, in the order in which they are received.
Revisions/Clarifications Needed
Your heroic/villainous section was a little scant. It would be nice to get a little more on how you feel the character fits into the morality scheme of their own universe. Further, you do need to choose between Journeyman and Mentor. Obviously, this status is malleable, but as it will be listed for IC player communication, you would need to choose which one you feel best represents him. And lastly, do the Aeslin mice have, in your opinion, sentience? If this is the case, they will not be able to accompany him. If not, then it would be allowed.
Once you've made the requested revisions, please reply to this posting and we will once again review your application. Please note that revisions are processed, along with applications, in the order in which they are received.